Culiedar and Li Shen

May 19th, 2010, 7:08 pm

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Reply YukiMimi, May 19th, 2010, 7:27 pm

Another break in between homework so I decided to take the time to add these two. Made them three days ago and finally decided to work on them.

TOP CHARACTER (blonde):
name: Mr. Culiedar
Type: Alien (from Grusto)
Age: thousands of years old on his home planet, about 37 on Earth
Gender: Probably male, but on Grusto the "parts" are a little different
Hair: Strawberry blonde?
Height: 6'1"
Weight: ??
Build: He is very thin but his bone structure makes him look larger when he wears clothes

One day one Grusto, they discovered the movies and books of the series "Twilight." It was without a doubt the worst thing they'd ever seen from the humans. Many died the day they read the abomination. It had such a powerful affect on the species that they engineered genes that would make a select few of them sparkle like the vampires and grow fangs. They then sent this new breed to Earth to terrify the creatures. Mr. Culiedar was one of them. He came to the school hoping to instill the fear in the children. He believes it is working since everyone appears to be terrified of him. In actuality, it's just because he comes off as a perv and flat out looks creepy as hell. Grusto teaches literature. He sucks because all he knows of human books is from Twilight.

BOTTOM CHARACTER (brunette):
Name: Li Shen
Type: Huli Jing (Chinese fox spirit)
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Hair: Orange
Height: 4'11"
Weight: 113 lbm
Build: Rather chubby for his height but he hides it under his clothes
Li Shen has dissociative identity disorder. He has 5 personalities (one of which is female) and they all love money. Though Li Shen (as his normal self) never admits to that. He uses his innocent, feminine voice and face to swoon people and get them to pay him top dollar for cheap products and buy him things. His family runs a hot spring so he is always advertising. His whole world revolves around money.

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Reply Masterweaver, May 19th, 2010, 7:39 pm

So Grusto has a much faster orbit then earth? Hmm, then Mr. C must be strong AND heat durable. He's also ironic, since one of my Stident OCs is going to be an ACTUAL vampire, one of the REAL ones...

And she won't look like twilight vamps AT ALL. Except for being humanoid.

Li Shen is also an interesting character. One of my RL friends has DID, so I can tell you if you're overplaying it.

Reply YukiMimi, May 19th, 2010, 7:44 pm

Mr. C would completely freak if he ran into a real vampire. Then he probably wouldn't believe she's a vamp because she's not like the Twilight ones xD
I can see many arguments in their future.
What a relief to see a real vampire for once. So tired of Twilight.

Also, I've been studying DID for a while now but it is always better to hear from a first hand source. I'll be sure to ask you about it if I need help. thanks

Reply Kafeole12, May 19th, 2010, 8:47 pm

much agreement on the twilight thing! (thats too funny).

Li is verryyy clever.
I love your character descriptions.
Ive never heard of DID before...

Reply Masterweaver, May 19th, 2010, 10:31 pm

Also known as MPD and often confused with schizophrenia.

"Don't eat, out to get you... poison!"

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