May I Watch?

May 17th, 2010, 5:05 pm

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Reply YukiMimi, May 17th, 2010, 5:09 pm

So, I didn't have much time but I wanted to get in a small comic;something cutesy. And here is what I managed to throw together between homework.

Akahana catches Aokishin practicing magic.
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Just thought about this. Aoki enjoys the fact that Aito and Akahana are such great friends and that she has someone to go to. He just wishes that someone were him. So when Akahana and Aito get really close to one another, he is easily annoyed. This is also why Aoki lets her get so close to him.

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Reply YukiMimi, May 17th, 2010, 6:30 pm

I'm pretty sure you can post whenever you want. That's what I did

Reply Kafeole12, May 17th, 2010, 8:04 pm

Awww! You drew akahana so cuute!
Yay! A page.
(reads authors comment) aww thats so sweet. I hate that his love is unrequented (although its unlikely that she'll ever take her eyes off Aito [ who has no special feelings for her])
Love is so difficult!

Reply Kafeole12, May 17th, 2010, 8:23 pm

@ willykins: you can post whenever you want except with comic pages. You have to say when your doing the next page so the storyline stays in flow ( you can post 1 page short stories whenever though.)

Reply YukiMimi, May 17th, 2010, 8:32 pm

AH! It's going to be such a mess with no love in the end (~> _ <)~ maybe I should have Aoki move on... later though!

Reply YukiMimi, May 17th, 2010, 8:33 pm

thanks by the way Kafe :) Her hair was such a nuisance >_<

Reply Kafeole12, May 17th, 2010, 8:39 pm

@ yukikimi: He doesn't have to move on. The person who has to move on is her. She is obsessed with a fake feeling.

Well que cera cera. (what willbe willbe.)

No matter what, this will come out interesting

Reply YukiMimi, May 17th, 2010, 8:43 pm

@Kafe: If that's the case then I'm making more cute scenes because I love how their colors look besides each other on a page ;p
:o I just may do some scenes of his jealousy toward Aito!

Reply Masterweaver, May 17th, 2010, 8:58 pm

On my honer as half dragon, I shall snow swear that a profile of my [i]first[/i] character will be up withing TWENTY FOUR HOURS.

Also, maybe its just me, but I couldn't make sense of this western or manga style. It's good looking, don't get me wrong; I just feel that there's a lack of connection, like you're skipping a few small but crucial scenes...

Meh, like I'm one to complain. Teehee!

Reply YukiMimi, May 17th, 2010, 9:26 pm

@Masterweaver: Yeah, it is weird. My apologies for the confusion. I just wanted to post something random today :p
I could only put in a few scenes because it was a mini comic and I don't feel like it's a good time to start a story line.
Please keep up the critique! I love feedback, be it good or bad! It helps me improve.

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